Hi guys,
This is my book review.
The rugby championship is coming up and Tolo and his friends to to the other teams club rooms to change the tshirt of the mascot. Tolo has asthma and when they are running away his friends put him in a shopping trolly to help save his breath and stop him from getting asthma.
I give it a solid 8/10 because it was not the best in my view.
Hi Antonio,
ReplyDeleteNice review. What did you think could've been better in the story?
Hey Antonio
ReplyDeleteI like how clear your review is! I like how you gave it a rating too! It sounds like Tolo and his friends are a bit mischievous, reminds me of some of the boys at school! Could you add a picture from the text maybe?
FROM MRS A @ NWS
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Antonio
I liked your opening sentence to your review. It made me want to read more! I also liked how you gave it a rating. I wonder if next time you could extend your comments by adding a few more sentences. I look forward to reading your next blog. From Mrs A
Hi Antonio I have decided to read this book as it relates to asthma but also about friendship and caring for other people. Tolo's friends could have left him but they didn't they put him in a trolly and pushed him. It also sounds like they are having fun reminds me of a couple of things my friends and I did when we were at high school. Can you recommend a good book to read Antonio?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Antonio,
ReplyDeleteI've never heard of this book but I'm keen to read it. Why wasn't the best?
Looking forward to future blog posts,
Miss Laxa