Hi Antonio, Ka pai on such an amazing piece of writing. I love how you've followed the visual template to help you structure your work and included specific detail to really enhance it. I've been to Western Springs a few times over Lockdown. I wonder if we've gone at the same time? I agree it's a really nice place to spend sometime and just relax for a bit.
Hey Antonio! This is a great piece of work! I like how you described everything in detail. It made me feel like I was actually there. It reminds me of when I went to western springs and saw some people trying to catch the eels. Maybe you could change some of the text colours so its easier for us to see the story.
Hello Antonio This blog is great because you put so much detail into this.This reminded me when I went western springs.I had a great time there.Once I got to close to a baby duck and a big geese came and chased me even though I was about three meters away from the baby duck but it was my fault anyways great blog.
Hi Antonio, Amazing Recount. It wonderful to read in every way. I especially love the way you described the each and every moment! It's Fantastic! Anyway Good Job Byee!
Hi Antonio,
ReplyDeleteKa pai on such an amazing piece of writing. I love how you've followed the visual template to help you structure your work and included specific detail to really enhance it. I've been to Western Springs a few times over Lockdown. I wonder if we've gone at the same time? I agree it's a really nice place to spend sometime and just relax for a bit.
Hey Antonio!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece of work! I like how you described everything in detail. It made me feel like I was actually there. It reminds me of when I went to western springs and saw some people trying to catch the eels.
Maybe you could change some of the text colours so its easier for us to see the story.
Hello Antonio
ReplyDeleteThis blog is great because you put so much detail into this.This reminded me when I went western springs.I had a great time there.Once I got to close to a baby duck and a big geese came and chased me even though I was about three meters away from the baby duck but it was my fault anyways great blog.
Hi Antonio,
ReplyDeleteAmazing Recount. It wonderful to read in every way. I especially love the way you described the each and every moment! It's Fantastic! Anyway Good Job Byee!